I have tried to write in a different way please give me your opinion about this style of writing.
He was tall
She was not small
He was handsome
She was beautiful
He was educated
She was intellectual
He had ego
She had patience
He wanted to confine
She wanted to fly
He shouted
She cried
He frowned
She smiled
His ego shattered
Her forbearance won
He gave up
She flew away.
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Loved this. Jazakallah Khair
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Classic one!
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I like it 😉 Very well done 😉
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It’s not bad! It’s quite good
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Thank you so much just experimenting
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Really good!!
Keep writing!
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Amazing 👌
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“He frowned
She smiled
His ego shattered
Her forbearance won
He gave up
She flew away.”
This was like the perfect volta! 🔥Loved it!
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Thank you so much my friend
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Nice way of writing..it attracts the attention of the reader.
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Welcome
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Very well written Haroon!
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My pleasure Haroon!
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Beautifully written!
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Will be great if happens truly.
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it will be
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Very well done.
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Nice
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This is amazing 👏👏👏👏
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This is beautiful.
I love it. ❤
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Minimal words and maximum expressions! Your poems are great!
You’ve a wonderful blog!
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Thank you so much your appreciation and compliments really mean a lot to me thanks a lot
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It’s a pleasure!
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It is indeed a beautiful poem 😊
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Very nice 👌
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